The one thing I'm not happy about is the fact I had to post it un-beta'd since I've put in so many hours at work (105.50 hours over the past two weeks). That's the only reason I haven't linked it here yet.
I would love to be able to post a clean version of the story, so is there a chance a kind soul will have pity on me and beta for me?
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