you can hear the whistle blowing
It's the first time I've been able to maintain a very specific atmosphere while shifting between past and present to tell a complete story. I've always found that difficult so when I saw the prompt during Apocalypse Kree, I jumped on it. It scared the crap of me though because the story wanted to have a 'poetic' feel to it as it drug Cameron and Daniel on a lonely road. I don't know about anyone else who's read it, but I think I did a rather spiffy job on it and I'm proud of it.
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