Kaz (kazbaby) wrote,
Kaz
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ACK!

Why didn't anyone ever tell me that To Serve was schmoopy in parts, and loaded with clichés? I am so going to work on the dialogue for this thing. This is probably why I haven't even re-read it in over a year or more.

And people like this story...why?
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